pretty fantastic that you found a double word! i suppose many words become another word when one of their letters get spun through the alphabet.
i had a thought. it may be sillydumb. because "zero" appears at the bottom, i wonder if "hero" could be placed right at the start for some reason or according to some reorganization logic... i.e. what if the lines were arranged so that the sounds rainbowed into a spectrum? that is, the sounds slow change from "H" to "Z"
hero wero yero uero oero aero iero eero cero tero ... xero sero zero
maybe uninspiring, but might also lead to a beauty surprise or two. or at least it could confound the otherwise predictable order, eh? and what about an epic title, something that gives this potentially surfacey poem some resonance or huhness? like a Greek demigod or anti-hero? i.e. Sisyphus?
pretty fantastic that you found a double word! i suppose many words become another word when one of their letters get spun through the alphabet.
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hero
wero
yero
uero
oero
aero
iero
eero
cero
tero
...
xero
sero
zero
maybe uninspiring, but might also lead to a beauty surprise or two. or at least it could confound the otherwise predictable order, eh? and what about an epic title, something that gives this potentially surfacey poem some resonance or huhness? like a Greek demigod or anti-hero? i.e. Sisyphus?